Feedback from ideas presentation.

--I was told my film needs a clearer narrative.

-- I was also asked how i would show the flashbacks differing form the present times.

-- To start with i fixed the narrative by creating a deeper story and clear purpose.

--I have also found out how i will differ the past from the present, the past/ flashbacks will be shown with blacked out edges and in slow motion as opposed to the present being shown in normal modes.